This is great! "The Vociferous Intent Magnifier on this model has a known semantic drift issue." 😂😂 I have insomnia too, but I've never produced anything at 2 a.m. except anxiety!
Chip, this was absolutely wonderful, I laughed out loud more than once! “GUMBALLS! YOU HAVE PILATES MY LAMBS FOR THE LAST TIME!” had me snickering, and “A GRILLED CHEESE!” as a riddle answer might be my new favourite non sequitur. Your comedic timing, world building, and glorious absurdity were super fun to read this morning. Sir Reginald and that armor LOL.
Thank you so much for this incredibly kind feedback! It absolutely made my day to know that the absurd humor landed the way I hoped it would. I had such a blast writing Sir Reginald’s completely unhinged dialogue - there’s something delightfully ridiculous about a knight being genuinely outraged over gumballs and Pilates class disruptions.
The grilled cheese riddle answer came to me in one of those wonderful “what’s the most unexpected thing I could put here?” moments, and I’m thrilled it hit as the perfect non sequitur.
Those little moments of pure randomness are some of my favorite things to sprinkle into stories.
I really appreciate you taking the time to call out specific moments that worked for you - it helps me understand what resonates with readers and honestly just feels wonderful to know the story brought some laughter to your morning.
Thanks James - you always know how to make me smile with your comments. It means a lot to have readers like you who stick around for the ride and seem to genuinely enjoy the weird places my brain goes.
Your encouragement keeps me motivated to keep writing these stories, so thank you for that!
Hey, it’s the same for me, man. It’s like we found the perfect community of support to keep our motivation and inspiration moving at max force! Know what I mean?
You're so creative! I feel sort of bad for Sir Reginald though...
This is great! "The Vociferous Intent Magnifier on this model has a known semantic drift issue." 😂😂 I have insomnia too, but I've never produced anything at 2 a.m. except anxiety!
This gives Monty Python a run for its money. I want a shrubbery!
We are the knights who say, “ni!”
Chip, this was absolutely wonderful, I laughed out loud more than once! “GUMBALLS! YOU HAVE PILATES MY LAMBS FOR THE LAST TIME!” had me snickering, and “A GRILLED CHEESE!” as a riddle answer might be my new favourite non sequitur. Your comedic timing, world building, and glorious absurdity were super fun to read this morning. Sir Reginald and that armor LOL.
Thank you so much for this incredibly kind feedback! It absolutely made my day to know that the absurd humor landed the way I hoped it would. I had such a blast writing Sir Reginald’s completely unhinged dialogue - there’s something delightfully ridiculous about a knight being genuinely outraged over gumballs and Pilates class disruptions.
The grilled cheese riddle answer came to me in one of those wonderful “what’s the most unexpected thing I could put here?” moments, and I’m thrilled it hit as the perfect non sequitur.
Those little moments of pure randomness are some of my favorite things to sprinkle into stories.
I really appreciate you taking the time to call out specific moments that worked for you - it helps me understand what resonates with readers and honestly just feels wonderful to know the story brought some laughter to your morning.
I'm promoting you! lol That was too funny. As usual, you don't disappoint Chip!
Haha, I’ll take that promotion!
Thanks James - you always know how to make me smile with your comments. It means a lot to have readers like you who stick around for the ride and seem to genuinely enjoy the weird places my brain goes.
Your encouragement keeps me motivated to keep writing these stories, so thank you for that!
Hey, it’s the same for me, man. It’s like we found the perfect community of support to keep our motivation and inspiration moving at max force! Know what I mean?
I do, indeed!
This was hilarious.
I'm with you on insomnia. A third of my novel plot planning came out of three sleepless nights.
Oh, the insomnia creativity curse! Isn’t it wild how our brains become these plot-generating machines at 3 AM?
There’s something about those sleepless nights that unlocks the most unexpected story ideas. Glad the piece made you laugh!